Englsih Help (Grammar) Part II?

Question:Please help me correct the following paragraphs.

" The designation of this machine features powerful 11 KW, high-torque spndle, and BT 40 gear spindle. This designation ensures the highest performance on cutting ability. The maximun totary velocity of spidle is up to 8000 rpm. This rotary can be used on both of machine A and machine B in order to achieve efficient and powerful machining. In addition, the cooling system of this machine B maintains a consistent temperature on spindle,bearing, and gear.

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The design of this machine features powerful 11 KW, high-torque spindle, and BT 40 gear spindle. This desig ensures the highest performance on cutting ability. The maximum rotary velocity of spindle is up to 8000 rpm. This rotary can be used on both of machine A and machine B in order to achieve efficient and powerful performance. In addition, the cooling system of this machine B maintains a consistent temperature on the spindle,bearing, and gear.
The designation of this machine features powerful 11 KW, high-torque spindle, and BTU 40 gear spindle. This designation ensures the highest performance on cutting ability. The maximum rotary velocity of spindle is up to 8000 rpm. This rotary can be used on both of machine A and machine B in order to achieve efficient and powerful machining. In addition, the cooling system of this machine B maintains a consistent temperature on spindle,bearing, and gear.
omit "The designation of" and go with "This machine"
maximun totary?
Do you mean maximum rotary?
spidle or spindle?

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