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The clearly expressed message in both poems is one of sorrow nevertheless they are put forward in a powerful way to ensure that they act on the readers emotions.
The title of the poem “Strange Fruit” is a euphemism. By referring to the bodies of the deceased as “Strange Fruit” Lewis Allan avoids being insensitive or blunt in anyway
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The clearly expressed message in both poems is one of sorrow nevertheless they are put forward in a powerful way to ensure that they act on the readers emotions.

The title of the poem “Strange Fruit” is a euphemism. By referring to the bodies of the deceased as “Strange Fruit” Lewis Allan avoids being insensitive or blunt in anyway

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I like the second response because its structure is easier to understand.
Line with an indent.
Second one, but it looks like you might want to run that through a word processor to fix up some of the grammar mistakes.
make it one paragraph but you will need to edit some of your grammer and punctuation

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