Do They Make Sense?

Question:Do the following sentences make sense?

POMPOUS- Though it wasn't a big achievement, he was still pompous.
PRELIMINARY- Having to speak in front of so many people, Jake thought his preliminary speech should be interesting so his audience would be concerned.
SUBTLE- His idea was simple and subtle, and that is why everyone agreed on it.

Thanks for your help. if you find any faults that you can help with, please do so. Thanks.
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Answers:
"Though IT" doesn't make sense because your audience doesn't know what, "IT" is.
For Preliminary, I think you should just cut out, "so his audience would be concerned" then add after, "interesting"..."for his audience."
The last one is fine.
There's a comma splice in the second sentence. The rest of them look good but if you shortened them they would sound more grammatically correct.

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