which of these sentences makes more sense or sounds the best?
1. It also affects people who are like john and have a family member who have gone into war.
2. It also affects people who are like john and have a family member who is fighting in the war.
3. It also affects people who are like john and have a family member who is overseas fighting in World World II.
also, is there any other suggestions you could give me on what to change in the sentence?
Answers:
If you want to be specific use:
It also affects people like john who have a family member overseas fighting in World World II.
Less specific:
It also affects people like john who have a family member fighting in the war.
It also affects people like John, who has a family member fighting in the war.
It also affects people who are like john and have a family memeber who is overseas fighting in World World II.
OR (my own verson of the sentence)
It also affects people who, like John, have a family member who is overseas fighting in World War II.
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