Is this a run-on sentence? and if can you help me fix it?

Question:Though Wang Lang was introduced as a poor farmer, with Olu as his subservient sidekick, he ends as a wealthy tycoon while Olu is then recognized as a strong selfless woman who takes care of her family first.

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Though Wang Lang was introduced as a poor farmer he ends as a wealthy tycoon. His subserviant sidekick, Olu, was recognized in the end as a strong selfless woman who takes care of her family first.
Though Wang Lang was introduced as a poor farmer, he ends as a wealthy tycoon. Olu, his subservient sidekick, is then recognized as a strong selfless woman who takes care of her family first.
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Initially introduced as a poor farmer, in time Wang Lang became a wealthy tycoon. Olu, his subservient sidekick, is recognized as a strong, selfless woman who puts the care of her family first.
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Yes this is a run-on. I think it should be two sentences, but I will try to re-write as one for you...

Wang Lang was introduced as a poor farmer who later ended up as a wealthy tycoon; while Olu (his subservient sidekick,) is recongnized as a strong and selfless woman who takes care of her family first.
yes, it is a run-on sentence. Try this:

Though Wang Lang was introduced as a poor farmer with Olu as his subservient sidekick, he ends as a wealthy tycoon. Olu is then recognized as a strong, selfless woman who takes care of her family first..

good luck!
Hello!

On my point of view it is a run on sentence. You put to much commas in the sentence this might help:
Though Wang Lang was introuduced as a poor farmer, With Olu as his subservient sidekick. He ends up as a wealthy tycoon while Olu is then reconzised as a strong and selfless woman who takes care of her family first.
Although Wang Lang is introduced as a poor farmer (with Olu as his subservient sidekick), he ends as a wealthy tycoon. At the same time, Olu is recognized as a strong, selfless woman who takes care of her family first and foremost.

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