Please give me some suggestion!
Which sentence is better? Or give me a better suggestion, plz!
1. Who are going to be with me the rest of my life? OR Who is going to be with me for the rest of my life?
2. Attractive as well as to have a good education background. OR. Attractive as well as having a good education background.
3. I am working in Shanghai at this moment. I want find someone can be with me and have a fun. I don't care is she to have a job or not. OR I am working in Shanghai at this moment. I want to find someone who can be with me and have fun. I don't care whether she has a job or not.
Answers:
1) The second one is fine.
2) Attractive and well-educated. "Attractive as well as to have... etc." or "attractive as well as having" are both constructions that aren't parallel, which is incorrect. "Attractive and well-educated" (both adjectives) is parallel, or "Must be attractive and have a good education" (both phrases using a verb) is parallel.
3) The second is better. But you can cut it down quite a bit. You've already stated that you're looking for someone to live with. So "I am working in Shanghai. I want to find someone with whom I can enjoy life. I don't care whether she is employed or not." Or, "I am working in Shanghai. I want a partner with whom I can enjoy life. I don't care whether she is employed or not."
1. Second option.
2. Attractive who also has a good education background. would be another choice.
3. Second option.
1. Who is going to be with me for the rest of my life?
2. Attractive as well as having a good education background.
3)I am working in Shanghai at this moment. I want to find someone who can be with me and have fun. I don't care whether she has a job or not.
hope this helps!
1. Who is going to be with me for the rest of my life?
2. Attractive and well-educated.
3. I am currently working in Shanghai and want to find someone to spend time with plus have fun together. It doesn't matter whether you are working or not.
1. who is going to.
2. attractive with a good education and background
3. i am working in shanghai right now and i searching for someone to share good times with me.
Who AM I going to be with for the rest of my life
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