Have I used the best choice of words? I want to ask a Secretary General of a respected organization?

Question:(that I belong to) to draft a paper for us.

Here it is
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We would be most grateful for Your Excellency’s assistance in having a paper prepared for us on this topic.

Answers:
We would be most grateful for your valued assistance in the preparation of this paper.

Or, if you, really want to go for it.

We thank you, in advance, most sincerely and whole-heartedly, for the the precious time and effort you bestowed in helping us draft this paper.

How could anyone refuse after that? LOL! I know it is a bit cheeky but if you REALLY want this person to draft it then...
I think it is ok. It is respectful and clear

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