ive really tried to come up with one but ive either used a line from a song or the thing didnt rhyme. maybe everyone can jus give me one line and ill put it together?
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Here's the poem,
I am sorry that things did not work out,
I will not make a great pout,
But I wanted to tell you,
that I really love you,
and respect your feelings,
so, if what you want is to never see me,
I will try not to see you as well.
Feel free to use it. Hope that that helps. What your doing is very kind.
Can you please learn to use proper english (spelling the words right, correct puncuation etc) and no I won't write a poem for you because its my work and why would I want someone to copy it and claim it as their own? And this is NOT the poetry section, EduQnA.com home>arts and humanities>poetry
I just used what you wrote in you question...
I began to think, and grew the urge,
To sit down and write a few words,
Words of strength, my mind kissed,
But most of all, about how you'll be missed.
I won't be there every day,
But my heart and mind will be in every way.
I respect your thoughts, and your choice,
I'll always repect whatever you voice
Replacing my sorrow, with new found wit,
As long as you are happy, I will do it...
If she doesn't want you in her life, not even as friends, she probably doesn't want a poem from you. Write your feelings, and keep the letter/poem to yourself.
My life
My life without you,
I will never for get,
My heart, my soul.
I will give you,
For one simple kiss.
My love for you is so true,
And now with out, you, I fill so Blue.
I respect what you want,
So I will live you alone,
But wish,
I could tell you how much,
I miss you over the phone.
I know there no words.
I can say to change you mined.
So I will leave you alone.
And give you some time.
Please, please call me, If you care.
A friend I will be for eternity.
if you want so much to make something for her, it would be a lot romantic if you make it all by yourself, no matter how hard you try.
it's not sweet to ask people to write it for you and then charm your gf with it.
if i'll write your gf a poem, it would be just like i'm the one courting her and wanting her to be MY OWN gf..
You said you needed your space.
I wasn't where you wanted to be.
I not going to stand in your way.
I only want you to be happy.
OR
I want you to be happy,
So don't worry about me.
For if you are happy,
Then so I will be.
OR
I'm sorry I'm not perfect,
I'm sorry you want to go.
Just please don't judge me
on everything you know.
OR
I'll continue to tell myself each day,
It's time to go my own separate way.
And just to let you know about me,
I'm learning how to set myself free.
Waiting, watching,
Standing here silently.
Wondering what went wrong,
Was it something I did?
Wondering what went wrong,
Was it something I said?
Waiting, watching,
I will always be here
If you need me...
sorry it doesn't rhyme
It is not as hard as you think to write a poem. But if you want it to really speak your heart and for her to take it seriously, DON'T MAKE IT RHYME! this is the worst and most superficial poetic device. The biggest trick to writing good poetry is strong, vivid verbs (actions) and really specific details. I would start by writing down words that describe her and what you liked about her..Or you can try describing every detail of a special moment you two shared (use all your senses!) and how it makes you feel to know that will never happen again.
try this poem...you may like it.
You are friendly, kind and caring
Sensitive, loyal and understanding
Humorous, fun, secure and true
Always there... yes that's you.
Special, accepting, exciting and wise
Truthful and helpful, with honest blue eyes
Confiding, forgiving, cheerful and bright
Yes that's you... not one bit of spite.
You're one of a kind, different from others
Generous, charming, but not one that smothers
Optimistic, thoughtful, happy and game
But not just another... in the long chain.
Appreciative, warm and precious like gold
Our friendship won't tarnish or ever grow old
You'll always be there, I know that is true
I'll always be here... always for you.
No offence buddy, but if it'd not from you it's not real...
you said: that i wont be in her life but ill miss her. i respect her for her feelings and if its what will make her happy. ill do it.
tell her that...
My life
My life without you,
I will never forget,
My heart, my soul.
I will give you,
For one simple kiss.
My love for you is so true,
And now without you I feel so blue.
I respect what you want,
So I will leave you alone,
But wish,
I could tell you how much,
I miss you over the phone.
I know there no words.
I can say to change your mind.
So I will leave you alone.
And give you some time.
Please, please call me. If you care.
A friend I will be for eternity.
this is what ' sofar ' said with the proper spelling .he gets the 10 pts.
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