Please help me reword these sentences?

Question:A work submitted that is full of grammatical errors would most likely generate complaints from paying customers, and inevitably, a business would lose customers and develop an unfavorable reputation for inaccuracy that would lead to not bringing in potential customers.


It just sounds unnecessarily wordy to me, please help me reword them, and still convey everything I want to say. Thanks!

Answers:
Grammatical errors in customer communications not only damage current customer relationships, they also hinder the development of new ones by fostering a reputation for innacuracy among the public.
"Customers expect professionalism and any work that is full of errors is just bad business and can lead to failure."

how's that?
Grammatical errors will generate customer complaints, lose business, and incur an unfavorable reputation for the company.
A business that wants to keep and expand it's customer base could not accept a work full of grammitical errors.

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