How can I make this sentence come to existence, being that its the initial of my story? How can I draw the reader in?? Suggestions examples welcome. Thanks!
“You gave up on me” Peyton hear over and over again, his words still echoing throughout the room and in her chief .
The icy tone of his voice, as his accusation that Peyton herself have given up on him, echoed contained by the stillness of the room. Over and over again the stinging words he hurled at her bounced around in her mind, nourishing her with lonliness.
The words echo. "You gave up on me." Over and over again, Peyton hear them in her principal until it seemed they chock-a-block the air. But, except for her breathing, the shabby room be dead silent.
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